Switching The Nouns, Adjectives, and Verbs in "The Red Tree"

A star with distracting points
unstoppable fat points
the past carried them, swirled more
it makes it start
seething
interloping
it flies and shambles
found in a rock
the star filled blanket
filled with rocks
the mountain
rushes
but then swirls
the knives in the background
rendered
played unstoppably
filled the corner

Red Tree with line breaks

A tree with red branches
bright red branches
the red makes them stand out more
makes it look almost sharp
pointy
it looks very scary
like it would be in a horror movie
the branches
look like hands
as if it would grab you
as you walk by
the trunk
looks normal
but then as it gets to the branches
it just turns red
in the background
all the trees
normal...
then theres this one
all alone
in the middlw of the field
being RED!

Red Tree

A tree with red branches, bright red branches. The red makes them stand out more; makes it look almost sharp and pointy. It looks very scary, like it would be in a horror movie or something. The branches look as if they could be hands, like they would come out and grab you as you walk by. The trunk looks like a normal tree then it just turns beet red as it gets up to the branches. all the trees in the back ground are normal except for this one that is all alone in the middle of the field. and RED!

:) Me And My Boyfriend :)

This is me and my boyfriend on one of our trips to Maine. It is soo beautiful there, and i love all the trees and mountains. We are hoping to move there in the future because we both love it so much. but it is far away from home... :( so i guess we will just have to wait and see what the future brings us. one of the pictures was taken at a light house if you couldn't tell by the light house in the background and the other was taken at Old Orchard Beach.

MY PUPPY!!

This is my bAbY BeAr!! isn't he sooo cute:) he is a little over 8 months old now, and he is a purebread black lab. and he is a pain in the ass. he just has too much puppy in him and he never stops, he chews EvErYtHiNg and it is soo annoying. He is suppose to be a hunting dog but the training isn't going very well yet because he is a lil slow... lol for some reaon he just never listens, ugh and it gets so frustrating. but i still love him to death.

I arrived and the party was already rOcKiN'

wow there goes a shooting star

everyones already falling over and passing out

asking themselves " oh boy am i going to puke...?"

I joined the party played some games

chug chug chug the cup down

bah da bah bah bahhh i'm lovin' it.

tip the cup theres the quarter

throw it across the table

OW! a severe nail cramp

pLop, oh damn i'm good right in the cup

game over!...

pAsS oUt!

Conflict; Rising Action; Climax; Resolution

Mommy sees a snake
Mommy doesn't like snakes
mommy screams
the snake slithers away

alternative climaxes-
mommy runs away
mommy freezes
mommy faints

I kept the same climax as before a wrote it with a different scene

my brother got a new gun
brother shoots a bird
mommy screams
the bird flies away