Switching The Nouns, Adjectives, and Verbs in "The Red Tree"

A star with distracting points
unstoppable fat points
the past carried them, swirled more
it makes it start
seething
interloping
it flies and shambles
found in a rock
the star filled blanket
filled with rocks
the mountain
rushes
but then swirls
the knives in the background
rendered
played unstoppably
filled the corner

Red Tree with line breaks

A tree with red branches
bright red branches
the red makes them stand out more
makes it look almost sharp
pointy
it looks very scary
like it would be in a horror movie
the branches
look like hands
as if it would grab you
as you walk by
the trunk
looks normal
but then as it gets to the branches
it just turns red
in the background
all the trees
normal...
then theres this one
all alone
in the middlw of the field
being RED!

Red Tree

A tree with red branches, bright red branches. The red makes them stand out more; makes it look almost sharp and pointy. It looks very scary, like it would be in a horror movie or something. The branches look as if they could be hands, like they would come out and grab you as you walk by. The trunk looks like a normal tree then it just turns beet red as it gets up to the branches. all the trees in the back ground are normal except for this one that is all alone in the middle of the field. and RED!