Thursday, October 25, 2007

Switching The Nouns, Adjectives, and Verbs in "The Red Tree"

A star with distracting points
unstoppable fat points
the past carried them, swirled more
it makes it start
seething
interloping
it flies and shambles
found in a rock
the star filled blanket
filled with rocks
the mountain
rushes
but then swirls
the knives in the background
rendered
played unstoppably
filled the corner

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