Switching The Nouns, Adjectives, and Verbs in "The Red Tree"

A star with distracting points
unstoppable fat points
the past carried them, swirled more
it makes it start
seething
interloping
it flies and shambles
found in a rock
the star filled blanket
filled with rocks
the mountain
rushes
but then swirls
the knives in the background
rendered
played unstoppably
filled the corner

Red Tree with line breaks

A tree with red branches
bright red branches
the red makes them stand out more
makes it look almost sharp
pointy
it looks very scary
like it would be in a horror movie
the branches
look like hands
as if it would grab you
as you walk by
the trunk
looks normal
but then as it gets to the branches
it just turns red
in the background
all the trees
normal...
then theres this one
all alone
in the middlw of the field
being RED!

Red Tree

A tree with red branches, bright red branches. The red makes them stand out more; makes it look almost sharp and pointy. It looks very scary, like it would be in a horror movie or something. The branches look as if they could be hands, like they would come out and grab you as you walk by. The trunk looks like a normal tree then it just turns beet red as it gets up to the branches. all the trees in the back ground are normal except for this one that is all alone in the middle of the field. and RED!

:) Me And My Boyfriend :)

This is me and my boyfriend on one of our trips to Maine. It is soo beautiful there, and i love all the trees and mountains. We are hoping to move there in the future because we both love it so much. but it is far away from home... :( so i guess we will just have to wait and see what the future brings us. one of the pictures was taken at a light house if you couldn't tell by the light house in the background and the other was taken at Old Orchard Beach.

MY PUPPY!!

This is my bAbY BeAr!! isn't he sooo cute:) he is a little over 8 months old now, and he is a purebread black lab. and he is a pain in the ass. he just has too much puppy in him and he never stops, he chews EvErYtHiNg and it is soo annoying. He is suppose to be a hunting dog but the training isn't going very well yet because he is a lil slow... lol for some reaon he just never listens, ugh and it gets so frustrating. but i still love him to death.

I arrived and the party was already rOcKiN'

wow there goes a shooting star

everyones already falling over and passing out

asking themselves " oh boy am i going to puke...?"

I joined the party played some games

chug chug chug the cup down

bah da bah bah bahhh i'm lovin' it.

tip the cup theres the quarter

throw it across the table

OW! a severe nail cramp

pLop, oh damn i'm good right in the cup

game over!...

pAsS oUt!

Conflict; Rising Action; Climax; Resolution

Mommy sees a snake
Mommy doesn't like snakes
mommy screams
the snake slithers away

alternative climaxes-
mommy runs away
mommy freezes
mommy faints

I kept the same climax as before a wrote it with a different scene

my brother got a new gun
brother shoots a bird
mommy screams
the bird flies away

My Morning

My alarm goes off, I Turn it off and fall back asleep. I wake up...look at the clock "hOlLy ShIt", i jump out if bed and into the shower. Brush by teeth quickly blow dry my hair and get all beautified. Let the animals out and feed them, put them back in the cage. run to my car drive really fast to Suny Canton. Walk really fast up the enormous hill to Cooks 206 to my class room to find everyone standing outside the door because the door is locked... and the teacher was just getting there as well. No BrEaKfAsT!!! :(

Freewriting

My favorite color is bLuE it is such a pretty color. The sky is blue, it can be a light blue all the way to a really dark blue that is almost black at night. The stars at night make the deep blue sky even more beautiful. I don't like when the weather is cloudy and rainy because the clouds cover up to blue sky and at night they cover up all of thee stars. I enjoy laying out some nights when the sky is clear, and when it's not too cold outside, to look at the stars and to watch for shooting stars. I think shooting starts are amazing I get this big rush when I finally see one, and I am always like "There goes one" to whomever I am laying out with.

Glazed Donuts

I really like glazed donuts although they aren't necessarily good for me to eat. i really like the glazed munchkins from Dunkin Donuts but nothing beats my moms home made raised glazed donuts...mmm...they are the best ever!!

Art - Leaves and the Toilet "Fountain"

I feel that the leaves is art because somebody actually had to create that. Somebody had to put their time into finding those leaves and putting them in that line. From green to almost black. I see this line of leaves as the process theygo through. the green they are when they first grow, then the colors they change to in the fall then to black as they die. The toilet is not art on the other hand. it is just a urinal turned upside down with a signature on it. It is just a picture of a urinal to me. It makes me feel that anyone can take a picture of anything and that it should be able to be art. I think art should actually be made, thought up, and actually created by someone like the leaves were, like a painting, sculpture or drawing.