A tree with red branches
bright red branches
the red makes them stand out more
makes it look almost sharp
pointy
it looks very scary
like it would be in a horror movie
the branches
look like hands
as if it would grab you
as you walk by
the trunk
looks normal
but then as it gets to the branches
it just turns red
in the background
all the trees
normal...
then theres this one
all alone
in the middlw of the field
being RED!
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Right! Simply deciding to make the first two breaks BOTH on "branches" is a major aesthetic choice in your poem making. Thanks. ~R
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